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yes! mc is female gender locked:)

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damn that's actually quite a unique concept for a yandere, makes them a whole lot scarier lol! I now understand his character more o.o and I didn't know you weren't native, my apologies! Well actually I'm not either, czech is my first language but I learnt english very early on, so i may aswell be a native speaker lol. The only reason I said that it sounds like a 10 year old wrote it is bc i wrote a pokemon story when i was 10 and the dialogue reminded me of how I wrote the pokemon battles lol! I meant no hate T_T

And honestly, the dialogue is overall very good, our partner's dialogue did a great job of making me hate him lol, and Zehir's dialogue aand VA is honestly incredible!! As for those descriptive bits, I will absolutely rewrite them- i dont have much time today, but ill make sure to add them in the next few days, I'll just reply to this comment with the original line and then with the rewritten version next to it- you can use them in the game or edit them however you like after that!! :D 

And I can also say places where I think it would be cool to have choices, if you want, I can also include that in the next comment.:) and if there's any future characters you need help writing/designing, I'm absolutely open to it!! character design and writing is my speciality;D Honestly, I would help with backgrounds, but I fear I'm a beginner at backgrounds, I have just now started incorporating backgrounds into my works lol, but honestly the art in this game is incredible and does not need anything done to it at all. The only two bits where I found something is in the kiss scene, it describes him as kissing MC hungrily and ferociously, but in the cg it looked like a little peck LOL, and in his sprite when he has this mouth closed his teeth sort of look like tiny doritos sticking out of his mouth, but honestly, i only realised bc i am very observant and nitpicky, and i criticise almost every single media i consume, I just love being a critic, and i guess i have a natural eye for it, i also observe and critique things a lot so i know what to do and what not to do in my own works, so a normal person absolutely would not ven notice these details, and they are insignificant anyways, and absolutely do not need changing if you don't wish to do so, again im just very observant and nitpicky about basically everything lol. But if u do ever need help with anything art related, even though our styles are very different, as i said i do have experience working with other styles and help my freinds with their drawings a lot, so im very good at editing drawings to make them look better or even at mimicking art styles:)

As for my art, I'll show some of my most recent works (most of them are still works in progress) and unfortunately, these are some of my more boring character designs T_T i have like a trillion ocs and most of them have cooler character designs than these, most of them are my huamn camp ocs with some random other ones sprinkled in there, and the jster and wolf one is fanart qwq I just haven't had a lot of time to work on them because school and life stuff is really taking up my time:')  our art styles are very different but I have a lot of self insert ocs for media that i like, and i sometimes do screencaps with my oc in it, so im pretty good at replicating artstyles if you ever need help with any of your art, but it honestly doesn't need it as far as i've seen, but i'm always open.<3 anyways ill just show my art since you asked but it's very different to your style so idek why im showing it but honestly ill get any chance to show people my stuff LOL, u dont even need to reply 2 this bit if u dont want to <33 but if u do then some of them r older and some r newer, so if the heads look too big on some of them or some anatomy looks off, its probably one of my older works, i was struggling with finding my style for a while, but ive just recently sort of settled down, so the newer ones definitely look more improved in my opinion:) itch is very weird with attaching photos, so i added some in a collage and added the ones i could again with higher resolution lol( also the image of the bedroom under this is my mha ocs room/my dream room, and basically the closest thing ive ever gotten to drawing an actual background:3)

anyways here are my drawings, again im just adding them here mostly for me lol, so u dont gotta look at them if u dont want 2<3 

omg preach i need this in english right NEOW i love the character designs smmmughhh (also cant believe i found u in another comment section twin)

This vn  is very interesting, I really do love Zehir lol, the switchup was crazy! I've already seen some others touch on this, so I won't say too much, and I understand that Zehir is just someone that goes with what he is feeling at that moment, and I know this is rushed, but now that you have time to work on it and develop it I really feel like you should slow it down just a little bit. For example, have Zehir and MC both slowly realise that what they are doing is wrong, or atleast give MC options to do so, and have Zehir have moments of slight realisation before going back to what he is doing or have him doubt himself, something like that to smooth it out a little rather than having a massive jump lol! Again, now that you have more time to work on this, I would love to see more options for MC, especially regarding personality. I know you had limited time to work on this, so I mean no hate, but now that you do have time it would be great to see options to ask Zehir questions at certain times, or to have choices to do certain things, choices to go to different places that could give different outcomes etc. I did feel like the kiss scene was wayy too rushed and it would have been nice to have an option to like push him away and get angry there! Again, after you have time to work on it obviously lol. But in my personal opinion(just my opinion!) I do feel that in the full game the kiss scene should not come so early(or have the option to push him away), I feel as if it would be better to have it later on after we have developed a bit more of a relationship with him. I have seen someone complain about the MC not being customizable, but honestly, that's no issue. Whilst I do prefer VNs where you can customize MC, this is your VN and you should get to choose how MC looks if you would so desire. I mean it would be amazing if there was MC customization, I would love that!! But again, it is your VN so do what you want.:) And lastly, I feel like the writing was extremely lacking in some of the parts. Zehir's dialogue was mostly amazing, and the VA did an amazing job! I'm more so talking about the descriptive parts, like when it's describing what is happening. Forgive me if I sound rude, but it really did remind me of how I used to write when I was 10 lol. Our partner(forgot his name) was really annoying and his dialogue did a pretty good job at portraying his character, MC was a bit lackluster- something I would hope would be fixed in the full game with more choice options for different personalities. The descriptive bits as I mentioned earlier did especially bug me off however, because it did sort of ruin the immersion. I thought of some things you could say instead, that in my opinion improve the wording a whole lot. And if you would like, I could write them for you down below, and you could use them in the full game if you so wish, because really, I'm only typing this whole thing because I do really like this VN and see it's potential to be something even greater! I really hope I did not come off as rude because that is not my intention, I genuinely want to see this VN succeed and honestly, would be so open in helping you if you wish. I hope you did gain some insight from this whole paragraph lol, and please do reply if you wish me to rewrite some of the descriptive bits, because I am so down to do so or help in any other way. I am an artist and a writer, so I can help if you want me to. Well either way, goodluck on developing this, and I hope anyone reading this has a great day!:3

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wait I love this idea, also am I tweaking or is that Casper in ur Pfp🤔(edit: Just viewed ur profile and i am now certain ut is Casper. I love the cg on ur Prof:3)

AYYYY I hope u enjoy my visualnovel collections😁

NOO I WASNT LOLLL but even when I put it on max it’s still super slow😔😔and I mean like if I did â choice and want to change it, I have to go out of the chapter and SKIP IT ALL AGAINN and sometimes I js wanna experiment w my choices to see which one I like and normally I could do that by simply saving and going back easily by clicking on the save, but on this gane it’s very time consuming🥹🥹

like you can’t save the game at certain points, if you wanna go back and change something you have to go out of the chapter then go back in then put it on skip until the choice comes up, and the skip button is reallyyy slow T_T

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I love the way u talk twin, and artblock and laziness is so real lol😭😭also so many goated things are coming out in may! First ch3 of this smazing game and then the backrooms movie is coming out!! Truly a months for spooky related stuff to release<3 can’t wait!! (Also if dev sees this it would be cool to have like a mcbling/y2k style Makeup in the customisation section!! Like with Smokey eyes and eyeshadow and stuff. Just a suggestion since tjats the makeup I wear irl and I think it would look good^^)

yea and it makes going back to do a different choice so annoyingಥ_ಥ

heh😋😋 I have a mega awesome vn collection on my profule if yew wanna check those out.. I have one w my faves at the bottom of my prof I think u would like some of them based off of what games u like:3

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I absolutely adore ur name twin💖

edit: just read ur profile and ur fav games/ goon collection is so goated, u know peak bruh

okie thanks ill try that!!:3

I so agree, this is one of my fave vns but i was kinda dissapoinyed at how short the endings were, maybe its cuz i got too hooked on the characters lol.. i would a hundo percent pay for a DLC or smth like that x3

on EVERYBODYS soul

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lost in limbo has a similar sort of dark vibe to this game, and it has two female LIs! Its still in development but its AMAZING. I recommend it very much^^

i downloaded the one that said "windows 312 mb" so im guessing the most recent one since i downloaded it like two or three days ago, and im on a windows go pro!:) 

bruh thats so cute oemgee!! ill be on the lookout for any alaris references once the full game is out.. 👀 both ur games r so goated, im obsessed w both lol.. actually fun fact both vns r in my "best vns ever" collection heh:D(fenir, kayn- envy, ara and xal r my goats) anyways i hope both ur productions go well! x and wooo i cant wait to see more of seer.. ill just be waiting in the shadows for this to release dont mind me^^ thanks 4 replyingg!

does anyone know how to buy blood currency? whenever i try the screen just freezes :'D

why does jose look like a rooster and emily look like a goat im crine


also i love maya shes so cutie patootie ohmygosh

yes abel there is no queen of england.. she died years ago i fear..

omg real!! i feel like so many visual novl mcs are so serious too, and thats fine if thats what u want for ur mc, but im very much the opposite of that, so i love this!

i love all the interactive bits and the characters sm, geniunely amazing game! my only issues r that u cant turn off the BG music and not being able to save the game whenever u want is rlly stressing me out.. :'3

Im fucking sobbing i love these characters sm

im literally not even a minute in but i already LOVE this game, MC is so me, im giggling at how funny the stuff im saying is too. i rarely find a vn that has an mc similar 2 me, so im alr enjoying this sm teehee.. I CANT WAIT TO MEET MARSS

also when we get to cleaning the attic, after i finish looking through everything, the game js freezes q.q any1 have any idea how to fix this?

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i love the way u talk twin, im following u (also js realised we both have dog filter pfps heh:D

This game is really enjoyable so far! admittedly, im only  very early in- and since MCs personality and appearance (guessing by the descriptions, i have mc turned off lol) are complete polar opposites of me, its a littlehard to imagibe myself in these scenarios- but obviousky thats not a complaint, lol, js smth personal from me, obvi ur allowed to make ur mc however u please!! the game is still very cute:D i do have an issue though- when i click the screen nothing happens, i have to let it auto play which is annoyingly slow or fast sometimes q.q but i love the ADHD cat cleaning the rug lol, my autism brain is eating that up. much love to all the devs and cant wait for future updates!!^_^ also love the art style:3

bruh SAMEE i need more of the seer pls😔😔

Omg im so hooked, one of the best vns ever!! I wont write too much bc then id be here for years lol, but question for the devs if they can answer: will the seer pop up in the future in the game? bc i feel like hes the one that got us trapped in limbo in the first place, and he knows a lot about us, and he seems to be working for some1.. plus theres a lot of art of him which makes me think theres more of him to be seen!! (also i kinda js wanna see him again lol, esp considering he js dissapeared after sending us to limbo..) also quick side note: i was playing the vn "alaris" and in kayn's route(i think?) there was a mention of being "lost in limbo" and it described the tower in the sky and the inbetween realm and everything lol!! now ik limbo is an already established thing, but im pretty sure that ive seen this vn and alaris interact/be together in some form or another somewhere if im not mistaken?? just thought that was cool- also my personal headcannon is that alaris and lost in limbo r set in the same universe as eachother- i mean it kiindaaa makes sense righhhttt??:D anyways, thanks 4 reading and much love to all the devs!!<3

honestly same, one of my fave visual novels too! for me the mc is a bit boring/rude a lot of the time but maybe thats just because im a very kind and eccentric person lol.. :'D i do love the times when mc gets to be more vulnerable tho, like in cirrus' route or at the start of keirs. overall its still amazing though, cant wait for more updates^_^ 

am i tweaking or do the characters and some of the backgrounds look AI generated??

guys how do i get the ending where he DOESNT kill me pls😭

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