exquisite meal chef, enjoyed this one a lot 🔥 now personally im a guy but this vn just looked too much of a banger not to play. and im glad i did, it was a joy to play x3 i especially liked your narrative and character writing. now, i hate that fcker lane; what an annoying asshole i hope he dies a slow, agonizing death. but the way you wrote him was very well done ! :D (hate the character, recognize the well-done characterization and all that lol)
think you did an especially great job at writing his casual sexism and toxic male bravado. i've played a lot of vns but not one where the LIs are this 'flawed' and, in a way, realistic. so it was a breath of fresh air. (and! the worldbuilding. god the horrors of working a nightshift at a convenience store as a woman go crazy. someone please give her a gun). it is, again, a breath of fresh air to see a world this flawed and realistic be depicted in vns
the protagonist as well! i always find myself with the problem that some vns tend to write the mc,,, too 'feminine' or emotionally weak, so it's nice to see a protagonist who talks back and doesn't let herself be so blatantly disrespected for a change (you bet ur ass i used every option to slap lane when i could) (more options to beat the sht out of him please)
very intrigued to see what went down between amelia and the mc and who that red helmet belonged to (i already have some theories). overall, enjoyed the atmosphere of the game a lot <3 the art, narrative and characterization... very looking forward to see what chef decides to cook up next 🔥
i wish you the best of luck with this project and hope it turns out how you envisioned it! x3
(also biker boyyyy my babygirllll god he's so cute)